I asked my tutor and he said it’s good but in the red line this could

http://e-lawresources.co.uk/Offer-and-acceptance-contract.php

this might help u 

and I attached the first draft for first claim of Alex party maybe u can take a look or use it 

Don’t forget they want advice every party

I have written the first claim of Alex

I asked my tutor and he said it’s good but in the red line this could be evaluation.

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